Don’t you care!


“Either you care”,
or
“Just only share”.
it’s upto one’s choice,
see who got that dare!

Would you?

What a life,What a battle.
Didn’t He(God) say!
your worth still matter!
Evokes some past, few memories lost,
with time that faded,
still green as you are.
Keeping that within, is that any fair?
You can go solo, but don’t you do some care!
March with us, don’t feel that lonely.
Life is so short, live a marvelous glory.
Many get detached, it’s up-to you.
Preserving that again, or go with new crew.
Sailor you are, it is your tour.
He got His glares, must be worth view.
Broken or deprived, it can be mend, right!
Now it’s you, who got to decide.
Lost your path, create a new.
Don’t stop ever, you have His view.


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8 Comments

  1. Wonderful post!

    I just love some lines so much like, “Evokes some past, few memories lost,
    with time that faded,
    still green as you are.
    Keeping that within, is that any fair?”

    “March with us, don’t feel that lonely”

    “Many get detached, it’s up-to you.
    Preserving that again, or go with new crew.
    Sailor you are, it is your tour.”

    Touched my heart..so inspiring!👌👌👌

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  2. Loved the last two lines..
    Lost your path,create a new,
    Don’t stop ever,you have his view!
    So beautifully the poem passes the message that He is always with those who want to be with Him.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you Chetna ji, I write out just one poem each day and give that to world. I am not a literature student, just passing my learning or realizations in a poetic way. You should also find your niche, what can you give the world through words. ty 😊🌷

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      1. Thank u soo much for your kind words .
        We are on the same boat as I am also not a literature student .
        I am also just learning to pen my heart out in a better way !

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