Today it is about a poem that might have changed you into something that you never wanted. You would try to forget it but can’t, cause it made you learn many things about life, that not everyone is your friend. Yes, you would know that it is the thing that made you what you are today. I could simply say, it is about trust, that you lost somehow. You try to have trust on people, but you aren’t able to do it for long. So poem goes like this:
For NaPoWriMo
Neither they knew, nor did I,
Neither they wake with the rise.
Believe in self was only option,
better had be true, not silly some caption.
Either they left or did I,
Either they stayed with closed eye.
Trust in them was at reception,
Made me wonder if it was my best action.
Neither they tried nor did I,
Neither now I think if I could abide.
Believe that broke with inner mind,
Still exists in making new delight.
Either they lose or did I,
Either now we keep, with the time.
Better be true, even for short,
Learned those ways defined that harm.
Neither they left nor did I,
Neither they said if I defined.
Guessing the thing that felt right,
even if did, who am I to decide.
-Rishabh kumar
Guys, I don’t know what could have happend to you after this, I will like to know your story to write after this, let’s see what what you actually want your life to be.
❣️💙Thanks for reading.💙❣️
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‘Believe in self was only option’ I like this because it’s applicable anytime and anywhere in life. When you believe in yourself, nothing from the external world can hurt you. In the end, nobody will make you happy if you don’t make yourself happy 💚🙏🏻🌞
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thank you for commenting, but you know, it is still incomplete. The should have happy endings. well it is true that believe in self is must.
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That was a majestic poem! I loved it! I loved the sort of conflicting ideas of the poem! 🙂
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my pleasure,😅i am glad that you liked it, keep sharing your views, i need improvements yet.👐
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Wow! So inspiring Rishabh! ❣️
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see my comment in my section
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as you are my friend here, you didn’t read to the last, i wanted some sort of your story to write as if imagining what could possibly happen to you after such conditions. !?
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Your poem left me speechless… I could barely come up with four words to praise you!
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na na.. It won’t work for me, thank you for the appreciation BTW, bdi mushkil se milti hai. .. but any few comments that you want to share.
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Bohot achhi hai yaar! I read it 5 times!!
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haha koi ni… BTW here is the secret, I just hid myself there in my poem, that was all about me, that’s why I forced but 💙💕💛
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Aap ho hi itne acche. Don’t let the comments or actions of others influence you! ❣️💕💕❤️
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hae mere ko 🙈,but really I got to keep that in my mind, 🤞
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Yep! Cause you’re amazing just the way you are! 😬
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well you are too, with that 😁, see Ya soon
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See you soon 💕
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Yep
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and should I?
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WildScaredCrazy
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Such a beautiful peom, in life we usually come across things that are out of control. Life doesn’t always let us chose. Sometimes going with the flow is the only option.
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really, we do… and it’s up-to us what we carry, thanks for sharing your views. 🙏
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