A few exaggerates.
Sorry, if making mistake.
Some said it was necessary, to remain inside gates.
For majors it was framing, for girls to decrepitate.
But was it really essential, to divide in such frames.
Domicile can be cheery, days can shine.
They could shake it long.
could make things lustrous, without holding mind.
Did anyone stopped, I said just, “No”.
Were it all prejudgements, who says “Don’t know”.
Stories unnamed, we retain untold.
For the right moment, very few unfold.
Wishing trying was worth for them.
Making up with the mind.
Yet kept inside, with heavy mines.
–Rishabh Kumar
- lustrous : beautiful
- decrepitate : fix, cook
- lustrous : bright, beautiful
- exaggerates : overstate
- retain : to keep in heart
Your words sing melody❤
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may be… 😅, I’m glad that you found that
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Stories unnamed, we retain untold.
For the right moment, very few unfold
These lines are so deep……You write really very well 😊
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well I hope so Era ji, thanks for commenting back 🌷🙏❣️🙏🌷
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Amazing Rishabh 🤩✨
And these lines…
Did anyone stopped, I said just, “No”.
Were it all prejudgements, who says “Don’t know”
Stories unnamed, we retain untold.
For the right moment, very few unfold.
They are just amazing…😀❤️
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thank you, BTW What did you understand from these.. could you tell the other readers please ❣️🌱
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The whole poem…or just those lines?
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haha… m leaving that up-to you🤗😉
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You gave me a big task🤭
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😉🌱🌷🤗
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I’ll do it Rishabh.. definitely 😊
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Words are🤩
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thanks Ava ji 🌱
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As always! It’s beautiful 😍
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may be.. miss curious. 🌷
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