scrupled bliss


Soliciting bliss,
early granted wish,
creates new challenges
with dawn and hies.

Waiting departures,
welcome like songs,
pleasing to ears
yet might it not.

Listen your words,
carrying hearts,
tremble might it be
but don’t let unheard.

momentum of state or
stages in momentum
ripples of waves yet
can become phantom.

So, should we stop!
Well, I wish not.
suspicious be the case
self believe won’t cross.

Guilt will be more
if blemish do win.
Certain not it be,
so let not doubt be kin.

-Rishabh kumar

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16 thoughts on “scrupled bliss

    1. 😅I guess I should have added some word meanings there, will do it later.. well poem is about uncertainties or hesitations that we face… just tried to give that a motivating thought through endings

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  1. Well, it is deep, you have written what goes in mind, very nicely,
    momentum of state or stages in momentum
    ripples of waves yet can become phantom.
    These lines are simply wow 😊😊 keep writing!!!!

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    1. I am so glad that you could get into meaning of those lines. thank you so much. I don’t know how.. but my thoughts give me some sights to see the depth of states.. and I just try to give those a positive ending in my poem.

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  2. Ohh! It took me four time read before I deciphered the meaning lying behind!😂😃
    But yes , it had quite powerful message ..yk. Listen your words carrying hearts… really good one !! And the last one too.😍✨🌟

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  3. Rishab, I wonder how you spin words!

    I had to read thrice to get the underlying message. If I’m not wrong, it emphasizes to keep trying and moving towards our dreams. If we don’t, guilt amd regrets may capture us.

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    1. you got it right Anisha, well I’m mostly twisted in my thoughts, may be that’s why I’m able to write like that… well the right seeker may get it’s meaning as you did. Thanks for reading it.

      And yes, I guess trying is the best option so far.

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  4. Well, I didn’t really question about how you do that 🤗😂coz maybe by now , I am kinda used to for having really deep stuff from you. ❤😍😍🌟
    But still thanks for answering it😃😜💫

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